The Voice of Dream
Every night when i dream,
i come to an unknown place,
a place which curse reality…
Your voice is calling me,
your hand is reaching out for me,
your eyes are always looking at my heart,
your warmth is something i feel,
yet you are not a saint,
so tell me who are you…
You told me i can visit this place,
whenever i dream to come,
why do such place existed,
and why reality seem so fake?
I wake up again,
remember the past,
remember the present,
i start to wonder,
how will it be nice,
to be at that place once again…
So come,
take me away right now,
whoever you are,
take me away from Earth,
before i lost control of myself,
and start cursing reality.
I am not myself anymore…
This is shared over at Jingle Poetry, Monday Poetry Potluck hosted by Amanda and Kavita! Come and check out other wonderful poetry at POETRY POTLUCK – Dreams, Visions and Reveries.
beautiful,
dreams take us to magical places..
keep dreaming…
A+++
Oh yea, babes! There sure is something superbly enchanting about dreams (the good ones at least).. they make you feel like you belong there, than in reality!
Well written, girlie..
Hugs and Love to you!!!
longing for the reality of the dream world, at times I think we all wish for a piece of it. nice poem
http://words4afriend.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/plateau/
Such longing leaves me with a feeling of sadness. Beautifully written.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/05/dreams-visions-and-reveries/
This makes me want to sell everything I don’t have and head into the woods..
belladonn23 said..
“it’s correct to assume that every living feeling person sometimes feels like they need to escape reality.”
Maybe because we are not actually living in reality…what dreams may come?
Love this .. points somewhere ture
i thought i would let you know: i often reread this one when i wake up after yet another restless night of dreams. it reminds me that somethings are only dreams, somethings are mere illusion and perhaps these things are better left to the fantasy.
i still love this one <3
belladonna
so sad and longing; it’s correct to assume that every living feeling person sometimes feels like they need to escape reality. I love the way you captured this desire.
Yeah, how everyone wish dreams can become reality=D