The “Deadly” Closet
A sound came out,
I wonder,
what is it?
is it a bug?
Or is it some unknown creatures,
that had just invaded my privacy?
As i went closer,
a lot of thoughts came out,
i keep thinking,
what am I going to expect?
what am i going to do next?
what if there is really some kind of creatures?
what if there is a corpse inside?
My imagination runs wild,
as i get closer to it,
the sound came out again,
I jumped back,
and wonder again,
what creature,
could have made this sound?
I decide to conquer my fear,
and I move forward,
to the battlefield,
and opened it up.
I realizes something stupid,
it is not a creature,
it was not an alien either,
it was just my chubby cat,
that ate too much,
and fell asleep…
Shared at The Poetry Pantry Week #11 hosted by Poets United.
I also shared it over at Jingle Poetry, Monday Poetry Potluck hosted by Amanda and Kavita for Week 14 - Hobbies & Passions, Pastimes & Entertainment. Hope this entertain you for this wonderful morning!=P Click here to check out more wonderful entries by other poets from our community!^^~
Poor little kitty. I used to have a dog that would hide during storms, then get closed in closets because we didn’t know she was in there.
Poor little kitty and you need a mouse too to keep her fit and awake!!
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bravo,
facing life’s challenge is no kidding.
love the sentiments in it.
A++
Loved the write! As a cat and dog owner, they have far too often caused many a paranoid thoughts to cross my own mind in the dead of night!
Sounds when you’re alone take on new dimensions. A fun poem to read. Thanks.
That reminds me of my cat so much! Very cute. Mine are here http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/hobbies-passions-pastimes-entertainment/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/i-am/
Cute (^_^)
brilliant piece.
the image gives me smiles.
Oh, Riika, this really made me smile. What a fun poem to read!
Funny! Around here they are making such a fuss about bed bugs!!!!
A very cute and clever poem…thanks for sharing.
Haha, no problem =D, i actually want to put a piglet inside the closet but it will be kind of obvious in terms of the sleeping sound =3