Diamond
I wonder why
a sparking stone
can be such a wonderful
thing that cut through
every single metal
in this world
I wonder why
a sparking stone
can be such a beautiful
thing that make
every single woman
desire it dearly
I wonder why
a sparking stone
can be such a charming
thing that brings
happiness in
a woman’s life
A sparking diamond,
a thousand of meanings,
a period of hardship
and perseverance
make a person
shine even brighter…
This is my 1st entry in the The Thursday Think Tank prompt #6 (Diamond) on Poets United as I wanted to share with everyone this simple poem, hope you like it =D
Working toward a goal is like a miner mining the diamonds out from the mine, all their hard works paid off as they brings happiness to women who desire them and diamonds are useful as they are used to cut metal. Diamonds are wonderful and make a women shine even brighter and capture attention of people around her, it is such a charming stone with meanings (love? friendship? promises? a lifetime secret?) that cannot be described in words.
Riika, this is a beautiful exploration of the diamond. You ask some good questions.
Happy Sunday!
This is Jingle,
It is strange that my name does not show up..
Thank you it been a great Sunday for me
~ and it is great to have you here^^
your words are full of wonders,
very thought provoking piece.
cheers!
I love this poem in its simplicity, its form, and in its meaning.
Firstly, i must say that your blog’s background music is truly enchanting. “A sparking diamond,
a thousand of meanings,
a period of hardship
and perseverance
make a person
shine even brighter…”
i love these line.
great poem.
I totally fall in love with the music when i first heard it=D
Wonderful way to wonder about a stone…nice read…bkm
I do like this poem! Very well written!
Thank for visiting:D your poem is excellent as well^^
Wonderfully written! I enjoyed reading it!
-Weasel
Thank you very much
glad you enjoyed it^^
The diamond like all other human myths weaves stories of love without reason…there in lies its magic…loved the poem.
I agreed XD, although i am not a diamond lover but it is something that will somehow bring a smile on a woman’s face whenever a diamond is gifted to her, it sort of show how she is important to you particularly =O
Riika before I comment on your poem I would like to say I really like your site. It is very well done and soothing. The music is a nice touch. And for the poem now. I really enjoyed how you capture a diamonds multiple uses, be they good or bad. I alos enjoyed the end how you likened a person to a diamond. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Thank you for coming
, I always love to look at two sides of things, either good or bad, everything in this world have its own advantages and disadvantages, it doesn’t mean that if this thing is good, it will be good till the end=D, it is up to how life goes at the end of the day ^^