Time
If only time can stop for eternity
I want to be embraced in your
warmth forever
and a never-ending reality
If only time can stop for eternity
I want to forget about
everything and the world
my sight has only you
If only time can stop for eternity
I want to tell you
how much I love you
while we embraced together
If only time can stop for eternity
I want to change my mind
I am not going to
let you go again
and regret for a lifetime…
But time is just like fate
a cruel thing that took you away
and our love will last in our heart
for eternity…
This is written as the ending poem in Tributes of Sonia – The First Fall titled as “If only time can stop for eternity”, the first semi-graphical novel series I had ever written.
I also post the link of this poem to Monday Poetry Train Revisited
I had shared this poem entry over at Jingle Poetry for The Poetry Potluck Week #3, a place for poets to share and encourage, you can check out others’ sharing at Jingle Poetry too!
Just lovely! And one wonders in life just how many people regret letting a certain someone go … Well done … both the illusration and the poem … This site is a golden endeavor. You have chosen your colors well. Poem on …
oh my!!
i have fallen in love with this piece of poetry you put up
esp the pic…
breath-takinly beautiful dear
nice rikka!
Thank you fiveloaf, glad to have you here=P
A wonderful poem about love to last forever. Loved the sentiment in this Riika,…awesome for our Potluck whooohooo xxxx Hugsxx
=P Thank you!
Hope you enjoy your stay here babe<3
Very nice. Great tale of love lost.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/
^^~ I am sure if you have time and check out the novel, it will be a wonderful complete tale=P
amazing imagery,
love your style!
Thank you for stopping by, Jingle =D
Time is something we all wish we had more of.
Yes wish i can just have 72 hours per day
Can do so many things!XD
I like the sentiment.
Beautiful.
Excellent piece! Thanks for an enjoyable read!
-Weasel
lovely style,
I enjoy the poem.
The story had a bit of romance side of it and i decided to write a poem in related to the semi-graphical novel I am currently working on, glad you enjoyed it^^