Fallen Angel
I used to be the
most wonderful thing
that amaze the eyes of Heaven
so loved by God himself
and lead Hell to its jealousy
of desiring me
Everything change
I been wondering
if it is because I love God
so much that drive me to insanity
or is because I am so beautiful
and strong that lead me to
create a new world
or maybe is because of
my rebellion lead me
down to a path of
no return…
A new world begin
as I fall deep into darkness
as I fall in love with sins
and indulge in them
every night I seek pleasure
every day I lust for more
Until this day
I can no longer hear his voice
I can no longer love him
I am no longer an angel
I am a fallen angel
which love the darkness…
My first entry to One Single Impression #126 – Angels. Also shared at Jingle Poetry, a place for poets to share and encourage, Poetry Potluck Week 1.
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excellent write…
Glad to see you complete your lovely share.
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[...] Poetry link: Fallen Angel [...]
breath taking piece.
Welcome to One Single Impression. You are a prolific writer of peotry. I envy you.
This is a wonderful eulogy in poetry to our bad angel. Lucifer.
Is there hope for him? Has he committed the unpardonable sin?
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There should be hope for him
Everyone in this world should be given another chance even if he is an angel himself 
, and maybe because he love God so much and see what humans had been doing to him, he got jealous and decide to create a brand new world that he thinks will be suitable to consider a freedom world, okay this is just my own opinion and hope you are not offended by it.
From darkness will stem the light of new wings.. and the angel will fly again.. and hey, I ask this.. WHY NOT!
That make sense too! Why not=P Loving darkness is not a sin ;D
Your poetry is full of imagery. Maybe the angel can fly once again?
The he will become once again the most beautiful angel in the world;D
Wonderfully crafted! You always find some awesome images to go with your poetry, I keep noticing them every time I visit. Great work!
-Weasel
^.^~ I am learning how to do some image manipulation through poetry and my novel, it kind of help as I don’t really look at the Photoshop tutorials out there unless it is necessary, I normally tend to well explore myself and self learn it
, And i glad it fit in well ^^~ Thank for stopping by and have a nice week ahead =D
That’s Lucifer I am sure..Out of envy of God’s power, he rebelled but was punished, hence became a fallen angel, in fact she’s the most beautiful angel…:)
A beautiful rendition you’ve done to this week’s prompt!!!
Yeah, thank for stopping by :3 ha-ha he was once a very beautiful angel ^^~
You never ever let me down with your wonderful talent. Thanks so very much x
Again a song for you and for the poem:
“Sing for Absolution” by MUSE
The Light and The Darkness are eternal Lovers.
Good job with this poem and thanks for it (^_^)
Agreed:D they are meant for each other ^^~