Inception
Break free from reality and truth
into a world like never before
and there you will see
a spark of hope and miracle
which will save you
from the darkness
No one can steal
this world from you
because it is a place
where you can only
decide what happen next
and this is only the beginning
Where you choose to start
with the darkness of despair
is where you will end it
beautifully with the
light of hope…
This is an entry to Writers’ Island Prompt #16 – Inception. This is a real tough one for me >.<, I just hope I don’t go over the line =X, as you can see no matter where u are, as you started something from your own hands, it will definitely ended with your own hand in time to come. It is not a matter you start it out bad but as long as you work through it and planned nicely which you think you are comfortable, surely even if the ending is not that great, you will still be able to enjoy the process =D
The originator will always get back everything and decide to end it or not.
so good Riika…..thanks so much for sharing your words
No problem, it is a great pleasure=D
Nicely done; I love the calligram. http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com
Thank you glad you love it:D
This is beautiful and uplifting. Heartspell
=D Thank for coming by and your wonderful comment
Beautifully said, personally hope and faith keeps me sane
That is good to hear, at least it makes you want to move on =D
No matter what, hope is always there..
red sand
Indeed
this is a brilliant take on the prompt “inception”. what better way than to end it with “a light of hope.” i really enjoyed this piece.
Glad you enjoy this:D It is always great to end things in well and goodness
Great optimism at the end there. Enjoyed it.
Thank you for stopping by and glad you enjoyed it=D
I really enjoyed this poem but I think I have gotten something out of it personally. The first stanza,
“Break free from reality and truth
into a world like never before
and there you will see
a spark of hope and miracle
which will save you
from the darkness”
Perhaps, my biggest fear is breaking from reality and truth because I have broke from reality many times and it was never a pleasant thing.
Although, I do see the hope you are sharing in this poem too which is always a great reminder. Never to lose hope. Thanks for sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I like the way the first stanza jolts me to attention – the idea that I must break away from everything I’ve held to be real or believed to be true, in order to find the miracle. Starting from the darkness eventually saves you from the darkness. Yeah, I like it very much, your poem.
I am happy to hear that you liked it
Thank for coming by and hope you enjoy your stay here. We have to break away once in a while to find the things we seek 
This is also a way to find the truth we been looking for as well:D
Where there’s life, there’s hope – You expressed this beautifully.
Where there’s hope, there will always be happiness as well:P
An awesome piece, giving the reader much hope for a spark, a miracle. Great post!
-Weasel
Thank you Weasel, as a person who doesn’t go through much in life compared to the rest, I just want to tell people that no matter how dark the road in front is, don’t be afraid of it, instead look forward and find the light that is always somewhere there waiting for you to discover:3
Like what you began here, a wonderful message that can’t be repeated too often and the music fits it well.
Elizabeth
this is deep.
A pleasure to read
Glad you enjoy the depth of this poem^^~
This is a beautiful and optimistic poem…and we all can always hope for a spark and a miracle. Nice message.
Yeah! It is never wrong to wish for a hope or a miracle
I thought the shape of the poem echoed the spinning top photo from the Writers Island prompt page. The light of hope is a great way to end.
=P Whenever someone start with darkness, the light will always come as long as one truly believe it =D
Riika what a lovely response to the prompt!
Pamela
Thank you Pamela, you written a wonderful poem as well, thank for coming by =D
What a delightful poem, Riika. Funny, it was in the shape of a fish which makes sense as we have more oceans than land. I do agree with you, where we start is where we finish. Lovely wording!
Indeed
Thank for visiting and glad it turns out all well=P