Love at first sight

A moment to recall
I know that
it was love at first sight
It all begins with a spark
as our eyes met
and our heart
were tied to the
string of fate

Everything in my life
that filled with
happiness and sweetness
every dreams that
filled with love and romance
and every moment
I spent with you
were like wonders of eternity

The journey ahead
seemed long and hard
but I know
you will be there for me
and this is only our
very beginning towards
a lifetime of
trust and understanding


This is an entry to One Single Impression Prompt#129 – Beginning and also to  Carry On Tuesday Prompt #66 – It was love at first sight.

~ by RiikaInfinityy 마왕 on August 17, 2010.

36 Responses to “Love at first sight”

  1. Hi Riika,

    This is so soulful a poem dear…I could even feel it myself as if I am dedicating it to my hubby!

    So beautiful is the message! :)

  2. Beautiful. Loving. Perfect!

  3. Simply beautiful and a lovely contribution to Carry On Tuesday. Thank you for your support.

  4. simply gorgeous. beautiful. full of love.

  5. love …always love!

  6. Great take!

    lost in our own world

  7. A lovely tribute to love! Wonderful post! =)

    -Weasel

  8. A very sweet Ode to love… beautiful!

  9. I like your blog, especially all the hearts. Nice piece, so idealist, it seems there are many places could slip in, great expectations. Just saw, Eat, Pray, Love, there is a relationship.
    Thanks for your comment.

    • :3 Thank you for coming by, a relationship is made up of so many wonderful things :D although I am not having one at the moment but used to have a painful one, the sweetness in relationship is something that words can’t be described but feel it yourself^^

  10. beautiful written – very romantic on one hand…our heart were tied to the string of fate…
    and with lots of realism on the other hand – just a perfect combination

    • :D I prefer the real hearts to be in the image perhaps because I am an artist myself :3 and thank for giving me such a wonderful comment, it is great having you here, Claudia :D

  11. Even this jaded old codger enjoyed this work. Well done. And thanks for stopping by Scrambled, Not Fried

  12. love your blog :) and this poem was true to the prompt “beginning” !

  13. A beautiful poem.

  14. lovely poem, pictures & music. Wonderful post. Refreshing.

  15. This was a really nice piece of work here. Good job.

  16. I came across your blog through the Poets United blog, and must say you have a lovely blog and this is a beautiful poem.

  17. Lovely…..I wish for you…..that your string of fate unroll sweetly, without too many knots………

  18. You forgot something… you must feel butterflies in your stomach.Very nice.

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