Sadistic Love
Your sweet voice
lead me into your
embrace of darkness
a place that I can
no longer resist
a cage of eternity
Pain inflicted
in both of my
Body and Soul
everything went
out of control
the pain taste sweet
the temptation devours
the passion heat up
The crying
sound of delights
make you want to go on
I can no longer resist you
In control of the situation
You come closer
The pain begins
scars and blood
remain as symbol
of my sadistic love
I had fallen in love with
this beautiful yet cruel
angel of the night…
Posted to Poet United Prompt #11 – Pain.
This is also shared at Jingle Poetry for its Poetry Potluck Week #7 – Love and Romance. It is a place for poets to share and encourage, do check out the link available to check out other poets’ works. ^^~ Happy Poetry Potluck!
I could feel every word. Great poem!
scars and blood…love.
I know about such pain..and the scars to speak …your poem feels like a healing salve on the scars for me simply because it is honest, raw, authentic, and beautiful. Like you!
riika,
Love and pain do seem to go hand in hand.
btw I am glad to see you back after being ill.
Pamela
Whoa! As my daughter would say, way Goth! But the wordplay is great, and the kinky side works. Liked this change-up on the usual love poem. Amy BL
Nice 1 pal ..
a very emotional kinda song
Take a look at my poetry
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/blood-and-sweat-form-patriotism/
(Selected for Potluck)
and
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/09/27/grief/
(Selected for Week 31 Poet Rally)
Sounds like something out of a neighborhood south of market here in San Francisco. LOL! Very well put together….sexy and dark.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/08/28/do-you-dream-of-me/
The seduction and repulsion combine here– nicely written. and congrats on your book!
I don’t mean to be bossy, but so many people are just going directly to my homepage that I am putting the links to my potluck poems here:
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2008/12/26/week-10-the-proper-subject-of-a-sonnet-is/
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2009/08/13/week-43-sweeter-far-to-me-than-any-flowers/
Just in time for Halloween! Nice piece.
A very beautiful post.. sometimes we choose to get hurt too because the soothing balm that follows hurt it gives more comfort and joy..more pleasure..
lovely!
A true potrayal of a love-hate relationship.. kinda sexy and kinky too
Great job, Riika
Love can be so many things …but still, even sometimes painful without love we are nothing! I enjoyed your post Riika!
As usual, I love your dark ones..!! Riika darling, you write so well..!! I am amazed at the fact that how beautiful even simple words could be.. My “Love” too was cruel to me- yet, I have made a loving one for him this time.. LOLsss
Loved the image.. Loads of Love.. xxx
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/10/22/for-you-my-him/
Not quite sure if this is beautiful or scary. It certainly does tug at the heartstrings.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/missouri-1907/
Love hurts so good!
You have to be cruel to be kind, in the right measure- your verse has reminded me of an old Shakin’ Stevens tune. A brilliant piece, the line that riveted into my mind was “the pain taste sweet” for it surely does…
As John Cougar said – make it hurt so good, very kinky!
Ha-ha =P Sometimes it is good to feel the pain and the love at the same time=3
Very nice ending Riika. i have never experienced a sweet pain yet, but i believe that it may exist. great poem!
Thank you Mory
Just make sure the pain will let time heal it =D
truly caught in the web !!
XD i can give u a hand by cutting them for you=P
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There’s always pain where there’s love, that’s for sure. Nice piece of writing.
Indeed =) Thank for coming by ^^
Love can be painful indeed.
Not all love comes in happiness
your poem is so real… love and pain … a package deal,… sounds like a love of human for a vampire…
love your blog… keep rocking
viva la vida
!!
Love always come in a package don’t you think so?:D
Your poem is strong….yet painful. Sometimes one IS drawn to the wrong thing, but one can learn from these experiences.
^^ Indeed it is never wrong to make mistakes, and amend form there on=D
‘The pain taste sweet’….
A very powerful, bitter sweet story written and felt.
Eileen
XD Thank Eileen, glad you enjoy them, all the taste start coming in one by one in love=P
Love can be bittersweet….this is beautifully written!
Thank you for stopping by
Love the “cage of eternity”…….the pain and the promise of love both well expressed.
Thank you and glad you love it =) love can be painful sometimes, it can become a pain to an extent that not even time can heal it, only to run away or accept it XD
Your angel of the night knows just how to mix beauty and pain to lure you in…temptation can be irresistable, sometimes. Beautiful poem…
Indeed :3
Wonderfully written! Great post!
-Weasel
=P Thank you Weasel, glad you stop by=P
You sadist you Riika lol. I actually found the poem quite beautiful and had to turn on my speakers at work just to hear what music ran along with it. Love your work thank you for sharing.
XD I guess so but glad you find it beautiful =D Though it is kinda weird for a girl to write such poem XD
sound so forbidden yet so exciting. Forbidden fruit, the best kind there is.
Indeed my friend:P
Nice, nice and nice.
heheXD
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/haiku-struggle-plus-belated-birthdays-awards/
visit three friends,
get three awards…
Cheese!
Would you help please?
haha sure been there and did it, thank for informing me, if not I would have missed it without even realizing thank you Jingle!=D
be easy…
love could be magical,
love could be hurting…
have fun!
Love and pain goes hand in hand…you have done a wonderful poem my friend x
=P Thank you Amanda XD Things always go in pair, thats how God balance it, somehow =P
What a portrait of a relationship your words have carved into the reader’s mind…crafted so very well.
Uhmm…very “sexy-painful” (this word exist??). The sweetness and the “cruelty” bitterly united about love. Good work. (^_^)
ha-ha maybe XD lol, thank you :3 not all love is sweet, it comes with bitter tooXD