Unconscious State
I don’t want lose you
I know deep in my heart
that you are
the one for me
and the only way to
know the truth
I must get to you
Drugs injected
Metal Rod implanted
I am ready
wait for me
I will come for you
and know who did
all this terrible things
to you my beloved
Brains synchronized
wild scenery appears
you are there
a question drags me
back to the past
and I see it
I definitely see it
the man’s face
and the next thing I know is that
I freaked out…
This entry is for Writers’ Island Prompt #17 – Time Travel. This is actually inspired by the TV Thriller Series “Fringe”, I am kinda of obsessed with this series as I love all those strange things that happen and people start investigating them =3, and this poem get you into the beginning of the Season 1 when Olivia tested out the theory Dr Bishop had done it once with a corpse that two minds can actually share information of the past in an unconscious state. As her boyfriend, Scott was badly burnt by th chemical explosion happened a few days back, she want to know the truth and she managed to get back to what happened in the past to see the killer’s face. Hope you enjoy this little thrill ride to meet the murderer in the face=P
The desperation and urgency of this piece is very enticing, and its melancholy cry of love is engaging — good work Riika…
…rob
Image & Verse
=) Thank you Rob, it is always good to have a sense of urgency when necessary and people tend to be desperate to find out the truth if it does involve them or their beloved somehow.
I have never seen the series but I really liked your poem!
Thank you Pan :3 You should watch it, it is really great^^~
I’ve never seen the series, but the poem was excellent. The ambiguity of what is really happening is very nicely done.
^^ Thank you Anthony, glad to have you here, Fringe is an amazing tv series:)
your poem has a sense of the surreal about it and I’m sure that is what you intended. I did watch the first part of the series, but never continued. You make me curious, though.
Elizabeth
;D You shall continue
I normally don’t really watch English drama thriller but this really make me to spend some time on it 
I have a different taste for drama and tv series in a way XD
Wonderfully written! I haven’t seen much of the series, but from what i’ve seen it was pretty awesome! =) Great post!
-Weasel
It is XD I am so addicted to it
Thank for coming by Weasel ^^~
But all that she see is real or a trick of her mind? Don’t know but will be pretty that your feeling can travel into the space-time or that a remind of your love can talk to you. Good job and good series (i only saw the first season) (^_^)
haha I rewatch the first season :3 I am so obsessed with it XD
That one makes Time Travel seem a possibility. Bravo.
=) Thank you^^
i sure enjoy your writings…..and your blog…..keep it up Riika
Thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed =) It been a pleasure having you here^^