Concert
It is time to rock and roll
Music blasted up high
Lights flying everywhere
The players armed with
guitars and bass
The drummer timed
one two three
let’s do this thing
and all it begins
The talented voice
got killed by the music
The presence of excitement
fade away slowly
yet the performance continues
breaking through
every silence moments
every demoralizing thoughts
having so much fun and
perform with true spirits
It is not the best concert
but it will definitely be
an unforgettable one
This entry is posted to Writers’ Island – Prompt #19 Breakthrough. I am actually not someone who will go for a concert, but I went to one yesterday as a form of relaxation and I truly do believe that it really take a lot of handwork and effort to be on the stage performing to everyone who are watching them and not many people can do it.
There is so much obstacles to break through and only the one who believe and work hard will be able to break through everything =P
Really interesting take on the prompt.
Thank you=D
You took me right back to when I used to play lead in a local rock band in the 70s. Excellent.
=D It is good to return to old times once in a while=P
I enjoyed this Riika…love concerts too. xx and then the voice
xx
Yeah:<~
awesome ,
love going concerts.
your poem make up a vivid and live one.
^^~This is my first time heading down specially just for the concert=3
I wasn’t at the concert but can picture it through your words..
well described
keep versing…
beautiful blog…
^^~Thank you, hope you enjoy this =P
Imperfection is human and that is how see the world around us if we choose to. Flaws have their own beauty.
Elizabeth
Yeah, everything in this world comes in two ways.
sometimes un-perfection touches us more than if everything is perfect – nice take on the prompt – i have written one as well
Oh cool true indeed, I will check it out later^^~ Thank for coming by:D
A good characterizatin of a rock concert….like the part about the singer’s vocie.
=D Yea, It will be great if I can actually hear what they are singing instead of the music blasting out loud XD
Wonderful breakthrough moment! I was at a concert last night. I saw two bands, Great White, and Night Ranger, both put on a great show. Awesome post!
-Weasel
Ha-ha I went off int he middle of mine, so many stuffs waiting for me to do, can’t really have a break but then it is still kinda good until the time when I leave =D