Farewell
If I have a choice
I wish I will never
let go of your hand
only to know everything
is too late now
as our worlds
had decided to
split us apart
forever
It all begins
with a fateful meeting
when you asked for my wish
I thought it was a joke
and ignore your presence
I had made a terrible mistake
Our worlds started to
tear apart our fate
as I begin to
fall in love with
someone who never experience
feelings and love
If only I have made a wish
I will not have regret
Until the day you become
a statue of eternity
and sacrifice for my sake
Will I be able to see you again
when I bid farewell
in sadness and tears?
This poem is share on Monday Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry, The New Poetry Community For Poets to Share and Encourage, do check it out at @ Jingle Poetry!
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romance is multi faceted.. nice rikka!
Thank you=D~ yea very true indeed my friend =D
we learn from these mistakes- heartbreaking, painful episodes yet we need them to make us stronger. it’s all worth the pain as long as we learn and remember the lesson. what a lovely poem!
I was touched and then amazed by the way you were able to weave the words to cause such an emotional impact. Imagery is great.
Glad you are in the potluck!
i can feel your pain….i can relate….great writing – from the heart. take care.
You too my friend
We can overcome pain ^^
This sad and lovely poem takes me back to my younger years. Thanks for a great read.
No problem,:) thank for coming by:D~
Nice. You draw me as a reader into the story and the regret. – bill
beautifully bittersweet riika!
I love this potluck monday!
Pamela
<3 Thank you Pamela =D~ Glad you love it^^
love is very fickled indeed…nice write…bkm
Yea indeed:)
Nothing I regret more than regrets. I hope all these praises may lighten your heart, Riika. Thanks for passing this dish for the potluck!
It is a pleasure:3~And thank for stopping by^^
Awesome submission to potluck! =)
-Weasel
This is a tragic yet lovely poem. Speaks of the loss of love and the hope of more. Love and Light, Sender
so very poetic. a great read. sad, but excellent! I will definitely be back for more!
Thank for coming by and you are welcome back anytime right here at Deadly Butterfly Betrayal!=D~
Awww, this was so bittersweet. I wish they had made the wish…
Yes indeed
Glad to see you link in…
your work smells like blue berry muffins…
love your work!
Happy Monday
Ah blue berry muffins :3 Sounds delicious haha XD I am working on the second one up;D~ See ya again soon^.^!
Sad enough…why didnt you make the wish?
Have a splendid week ahead…
Cheers!
:3 If he have make the wish, then she won’t have to turn into a statue :< Yeah, why didn't he make it!T_T
You are so wonderful Riika, thanks so much for being there for us and your help is much appreciated. I love this poem, sad but with so much emotion like only you can write. Much love to you xx
=D No problem, sorry I overslept just now lol, my alarm clock failed me once again XD, but glad the links are working fine =) Have lots of fun!<3
beautiful departure,
you did an amazing job.
^^ Thank you =-D~
Really enjoyed this, so much emotion in there. Love your book stuff too!
Thank you:3 I am glad you love it ^^~:D Do stay on the ride as there is a walk through going on =P~
Soooo well penned my friend, you always do such a good job!! xx
^^~ Thank you Amanda, you too as well
~ Have a fun day ahead my friend=P
Another lovely poem….the words and structure are just excellent.
Thank you^^~Thought in the end there is still a little sadness and pain
The bittersweet sadness and the lost opportunity.My heart remembers those feelings.Just lovely.(^_^)