The Wall Is My Armor
It is unbreakable
like an armor of
massive defense and
there is no key
in this world
can ever open
the lock because
there is no keyhole
It was built over time
as I forget how to love
with all my heart and soul
not even you can save me
from the torment and pain I endured
I need to forget everything yet they still remains
The armor that held my fragile heart which can break anytime
Will you be the one breaking through this armor and embrace me
or will the armor break my heart up before I can truly experience love?
This is an entry to The Thursday Think Tank Prompt # 14 – Walls hosted at Poets United.
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WONDERFUL Post.thanks for share..more wait ..
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I’d be inclined to admit with you on this. Which is not something I usually do! I love reading a post that will make people think. Also, thanks for allowing me to comment!
Hi I like your poem and love how you made the heart in the middle with red letters – very creative!
^^Thank you my friend, glad you love it =P Do come back for more
This is a world of fantasy after all;D
oh wow, this is just perfect – love the sentiment you express, and the mastery of your expression; the image and the shape of the poem, all goes together beautifully
^^Thank you
I love emphasis more on visual arts and words=P
Powerful, mastering the wall of emotions; Love and heartbreak!
Well done~
^^ Thank you Ellen
WOW!! Too good! The last 2 lines were STUNNING! Will you break the armor, or will the armor break my heart! LOVED THAT BIT!!!
Stellar poem..really!
:3~ Thank you, and glad to have you here! break it!XD
Wow this is a great resource.. I’m enjoying it.. good article
Will you be the one breaking through this armor and embrace me
or will the armor break my heart up before I can truly experience love?
Ohhh, so romantic!
^^ Thank you, and thank for coming by=P Glad to have you here:3
very nice…love the styling….never let the walls get to high…blessings…bkm
True indeed :3 never get the walls too thick or too tall, or it will be even harder to break through.
Love how you painted a heart on your wall of words…truly brilliant! It is a beautiful and well written poem!
I loved this one. Amazing structure and well written!
Thank you Kristie
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im feeling it
riika you never cease to amaze me!
wonderful!
Pamela
^^~ Thank you Pamela =3~
Powerful and an excellent image … well written.
=) Thank you my friend, glad to have you here, hope you enjoy ur stay^^~
This is a stunning piece, Riika! My eyes see the poem’s form as a lock, suggesting that even as you warn against entry, you dearly want someone to find the key and unlock your heart from it’s pain. Truly fine writing…
Thanks for taking the time to read my Belfast post..it’s much appreciated…:)
=) I appreciated your visit here as well, glad you came back and give such a wonderful comment :3 the longing and yearning to be release seem far but it never hurt to feel that way =D
Riika, you are so tough, LOL. I noted this poem was in the shape of a butterfly! Defintely your thing! So vibrant!
Yeah! You noticed! =P ahaha-thank you for coming by
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Strong response to the prompt!
=) Thank for coming by Mary, it is kind of like a personal experience i guess=P
Wow Riika, loved the structure…you are such a talent!!! Have a great weekend xx
^^ Thank you, have a fun weekend too!=D
RiikaInfinity,
An extremely powerful personal journey, with your words. A sense of protection from the wall, as well as a division…….
Best wishes,
Eileen
Yes it is kind of personal actually, even though I maybe young still, but when you realize you love someone truly with your heart for the first time and in the end he can only return you despair and pain…that kind of feeling will forever remained in one’s heart…and even time somehow can’t heal it, I chose to accept and moved on but in my own way
Excellent image and poem…another fine post.
=) Thank you for your wonderful comment^^ Glad to have you here as always
armor, a beautiful metaphor…
either ways,
masterfully done!
Thank you Jingle!:D I do prefer the wall to be my armor, rather my armor to be the wall =3
Keep posting stuff like this i really like it
Excellent post! Awesome take on the prompt! =)
-Weasel
Thank you Weasel, it is all thank to you who given this wonderful prompt!=D
I like what I read and see.
^^Thank you =P Glad you like them both ^^~
Perfect,perfect and… simply perfect. The make-up is amazing. Just remember…all walls are brekeables. (^_^)
:3 You just need a hammer I guess XD