Devil’s Door
Walls and Ceilings vibrate in fear
Lights dance in the moonlight
Covering up in the bedsheets
Shivering within the darkness
Screams come in silence mode
There is no savior of light of hope
A decision make to overcome the fear
Imagination start running wild as I move step by step
I swallowed my saliva and pick up my courage
going closer and closer to encounter the one
The vibration start roaring like thunders
I stop and look forward, there it is
Lights glowed out from behind
the door of the Devil and
any minute it will come
for me and devour me
Should I run or just
open up the door
to welcome hell?
The door open
just then and
I wish time I can go back
that I don’t have to
waste my time
shivering in
deep fear
Damn
the
P
a
r
t
y
Shared at The Poetry Pantry Week #9 @ Poets United.
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Wonderful shape poem riika!
Pamela
I love the way you shaped this poem, also the picture that accompanies it. I wish sometime I can go back too! Well written.
^^~Thank you and glad you love it, my friend =P Yeah! =333
Okay, let’s have a party – doesn’t matter if the Devil is there or not! Mark my words, you WILL SURVIVE. A fantastic fear poem, Riika!
Haha! Definitely, I will survive! =P I think the devil will choose to go to Hell instead =P
It is amazing how you fitted the words to shape the poem so perfectly. I have never tried to do a shaped poem. Intriguing. Lots of images and sensory content in this poem. Well done.
Fantastic imagery and loved the layout so much….Mwah xx
Glad you love it! =D I was trying to make a humor out of it XDXD
OMG Dear.. I had held my breath to read how well you may have defeated the demon- LOL, It brought a smile on my face..
I know I have said it before- you have one hell of a creative site to yourself- very impressive.. Wish I were as talented as you are..
Love
xox
love the shape.
very smooth and lovely word flow.
=P Thank you Jingle, it is supposed to be a map that the character walked through towards the stairs =P
awesome!
Happy Sunday!
^^ Happy Sunday to you too Jingle=P
You continue to write with such powerful imagery…another excellent poem.
^^Thank you Charles
Fascinating images; intriguing words.
=D Thank you, glad you came by my friend^^ Have a fun weekend ahead=3~