The Potion
The witches gathered
for the final examination
A potion of
strength and honor
Headaches came and
they began to ponder
what ingredients should
they use
Sword?
No
Trophy?
No…
Banana?
Definitely NO…
How about the gorilla out there?
Sounds cool…
How are we going to do it?
Let’s go to where the wild things are…*grin*
Not a bad idea for us…let’s do it!
Darkness fall and
off the witches went into the
forbidden forest of darkness
a forest that will give
you unexpected encounters
and the jackpot got hit spot on
They came for them
as they run the hell out of their lives
while one was smart to notice
that flying was the
key to survival
with her wonderful
magical broom
Don’t mess
with the
wild things
if you don’t have a “smart’” way out
The witch giggled and had the last laugh
Sometimes our mind can be really simple when trying to get away or run away from something, but yet if we can stop and think for a moment, there might be even more ways of doing it than what we think. Even in the midst of trouble, when there a will, there is always a way, And only you can find it^^~
Submitted as an entry to The Inferno: A Writer’s Challenge Saturday September 18, 2010 – “Where The Wild Thing Are…”, here my entry in Gallery 24.
This is shared right over at Jingle Poetry, Monday Poetry Potluck Week #11 – Magic & Miracles, Wonder & Wizardry. Come join in the fun into the world of magic and miracles~right at Jingle Poetry~!
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Nice work! In addition to the nice flow of the words, I liked the way you manipulated the colours of the letters. Very nice…
Thanks for the beautiful contribution on week 11 potluck, hope to see you next Monday!
Happy Thursday!
Happy Thanksgiving Holiday if you celebrate!
Happy Thankgivings too! I wish I can celebrate, never did once eaten a turkey =P haha~ Have a fun week ahead
heheheh.. this was naughty and cheeky, Riika!! Very smart of that witch though! Really enjoyed your wordplay in this exciting and magical read!! xoxoxo
magical… entrancing… why are butterflies deadly again?
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it is deadly but it will never betray the faith it holds within itself, a cover for its own protection to never let anyone break the walls =O
Now that’s darn funny! I love a humourous flow!
Powerful poem…
nice use of the theme
This was funny Riikka…and a superb idea of this week’s Potluck theme…
The witch got the last laugh!
Dear Riika
As usual your imagery is powerful and your presentation is perfect.. I liked it… the fun in your words…
‘that flying was the
key to survival’
Its a nice one…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Very whimsical! And that witch certainly was clever!
An experimental approach without a recipe. Only one witch was ready for the outcome. A fun read and a good way to start the day.
One should always remember to have a good escape plan … when messing around with darkness. Very enjoyable read. I love all things magical.
In contrast to a lot of magical conversations the tone of your poem is rather casual. I’m wondering, are your witches new age witches?
Ancient kind who doesn’t really put much thinking on their minds, I guess=P
A cheery way to start my day– thanks!
Glad to hear that, have a wonderful week ahead^^!
this i gotta say- i really love you block manga and i love those fonts colours you use on your poems..
Bingo!Sometimes in our panic we forget the easiest way out!
Just lovely,though a bit scary!Don’t want witches running after me!
The potions seem as spells cast of the witch in her greatest journey, the one into the dark forest.
while one was smart to notice
that flying was the
key to survival
with her wonderful
magical broom…
for witches, flying is magical escape indeed.
I read every word of it, beautiful story,
well done.
xxx
This was such a fun read! I’m glad they remembered the magic of the broom. Definitely a fabulous reminder not to mess with the wild things!
Now this is some great work with the witches. The banana line, priceless! Thanks for sharing this awesome piece with us!
clever and funny to read. well done Riika! Here is mine http://scentofmyheart.wordpress.com/2010/11/22/magic-world/
This does remind me of Harry POtter. I love your fantastic mind. And your new website picture! Here’s mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/11/ice-god-cometh.html
Absolutely delight. I’m smiling now… Good stuff, Riika. Also, am so grateful for all your beautiful artwork showing up on JP and here. Just lovely. Thank you!
This is such a fun poem. I enjoyed it immensely.
Mine are here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/20/apprentice/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/21/poetry-potluck/
hi again
Sky
Hi nice to have you here, my friend=D
Got a chuckle out of this one…thanks for the smiles.
=P Hope this will brighten your day, my friend =P Have a fun weekend ahead
your image reminds me of witch craft, such as Harry Potter…
beautiful work.
you are an expert on word play.
Thank you Jingle, haha I am not a fan of Harry Potter but love how the way the writer write them, it is very detailed and love it =3