Sun
I am the chosen one
to be the one that shine
upon the sparkling light to the
lands of nature and life. Even when
the gloomy clouds embrace me, I will come
back another day to share the warmth and joy of
my light to everyone who love it and treasure them well.
As the day starts to get further, I will be disappearing again,
I meet the one who brings the darkness and he asked me something
which make me ponder about how am I going to leave the world when I am
actually one that blaze with the heat and passion. No reply and answer, not because
I want to run away from my own fate, it is because I don’t know how am I
going to leave the world. There is no way I can die where there is
no one after my life, I am loved by so many that I lose count
of them myself. So I asked him instead how is he going
to leave the world then, and he say I will leave
when the time you disappear as well. I am
surprised and realize something. What
if there is a time when I, the sun,
grow old and cold, will that
be the time to say and
bid farewell to the
light that once
held me and
give me his
strength
?
Shared at Jingle Poetry - Poetry Potluck Week #2.
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Excellent and full of creativity. You really impressed me with yours words.
^^ Thank you, I am honored to hear that, my friend =) Hope this brighten up your day^^
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All right, I will check it out=D
Very good composition, you are so creative riika, great job!
Thank you Imagina^.^~ :3~
What a lovely story I read it twice because I wanted to make sure I did not miss anything!
^^ I am sure you didn’t my friend, thank for visiting=D~ Have a great day!=P
This was absolutely DIVINE, Riika!!
FANTABULOUS! What a thought! It’s quite scary actually… We love the sun too much to ever even imagine a “day” without him around! Noooooooooooooooooo!!
But the conversational way you have put it in this poem, is really excellent!! We are soooo thankful to you for writing this for poetry potluck! LOVE YOU LOADS!!
=3~ It is always great to be in Jingle Poetry^^! The darkness won’t come in a billion years time…even if we are gone…I think the sun will still be here=D
That is just a trippin’ read! Thanks!
No problem it is my pleasure, hope that will enchant your day my friend=D
Bravo!
that’s a really good question there riika:
What
if there is a time when I, the sun,
grow old and cold, will that
be the time to say and
bid farewell to the
light that once
held me and
give me his
strength
?”…..
a rubix cube of it’sown.
awesome view..
XD Oh yes, it is all in mind to think about weird and impossible questions XD~ Guess it is a really different view from others
Mesmorizing. Well done.
Thank you=)~ Get embrace with the warmth now, my friend=D
Beautiful both in words and visual aspect.
^^ Thank you Dustus
Glad to have you here! And enjoy the light, it is over here;D
This is – very simply – brilliant, Riilka. You must have worked hard on this to get the poem just right along with the arrangement. Beautifully done. Thank you for posting it. This is one of the wonders of blogging and of our community: If not for them, I would not have read this.
Happy potluck!
Wow XD, I am deeply honored!=) Thank you Jamie and yes, Jingle Poetry is amazing!:D So many wonderful poets in it =3~~~
The formatting is outstanding!
Beautiful work!
Pamela
Thank you Pamela =3~~~ ^^<3
gorgeous poetry for sure, Riika
I don’t know if the colors were meant for expressing the sun colors, but it sort of hits the eye, the orange on cream..!
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Oh yes :3~~Was trying to make like you know hmm, the continuous of the light shining upon within the poem XD
Gorgeous poetry, Riika, and what a stunning image!!
^^~ Hope it brighten up your day my friend=P
What an enthralling way to kick off the day. I wish I could make that kind of formatting work.
You are amazing! I love this…your words touch on aspects of my own inner world!
:3~ Thank you Annie =D I sometimes do ponder about it…but oh well, I am ready for it somehow :3
So beautiful and what deep and heartfelt sentiments. Just lovely!
^^ Thank you Talon =P Hope the sun will brighten up your day^^
K-Pow! Blown away by your ability with visuals. Woweee..
Warmest Salad
Luke
Haha, thank you!=D~ Don’t be blown off too much, come back soon!=D
wow- a lot of effort to do what you did- nice!
^^ thank you my friend=D
the image as well as your poem are truly bedazzling! this is beautiful!
the image is amazing!
my kind of taste on this one, way to go!
^^ I fall in love with the image too, I did a few color balance adjustment for the image at different section =P
love diamond shape like this,
it is mind blowing writing of confidence, nature, and the glory of the sun….
divine post!
=D Yeah I am trying some new effects on images right now, glad it works out :3~~~
Perfection!!!!!!!!!!! How do you do that? xx
;D Trial and Error, everything done in WordPress =P alignment and adjustment, switching between HTML and Visual mode =3
You continue to amaze me with what you write…so brilliant and creative..bravo!
=D Thank you^^~