Warrior of Memories
F
o
r
g
o
t
t
e
n
memories
drifted deep
within my heart
Fighting for
a wrong cause
Evil and Insanity
devoured my
soul and spirit
There was no way out
A battle called upon and
fate shall decide our final reunion
Weapons swung in mid-air
Crossed in destiny
Blood spattered in pool
Just at that moment
when the scythe of
leniency pierced
into your body
everything
became
clear
and
it is
all too late
The love that I once
treasured
had gone
into
the
Underworld
I had shared this poem entry over at Jingle Poetry for The Poetry Potluck Week #3, a place for poets to share and encourage, you can check out others’ sharing at Jingle Poetry too!
Love the flow from the illustration into the poem, both original and striking. The poem is dramatic and I liked the ending … though, of course, in life one would not.
P.S.: What a darling little kitty you’ve place on the blog as an endnote … I’m in love!
You have a vivid imagination, Riika,
and I love your presentation. Touche’!
Fate and Destiny — wood you believe…?
I wood
haha! Thank for visiting^^
Excellent, I love it!
WOW!
like, WOW!
never thought a poem could be like this.
amazing!
You are so creative. Beautiful post in all aspects: words, visuals, music.
Ooohhh… this was dark as hell! AWESOME!! Totally loved the chilling nature of this poem! You are an expert at such poems, Riika… rock on!!!
It’s a PLEASURE to read your poems.. thanks a bunch for linking it with poetry potluck..
I read almost 6-7 of your posts on this page and i must say am so so impressed !!! I am sorry am so late in visiting you .. my bad
And the reason i chose tis very poem is coz this is some what similar to my feelings in last few days .. Oh, not so much stong , but a shadow of darkness does loom there in my mind..
Keep rocking !
Thank you ^^~ And you too let’s rock and roll
OMG!!!!
i must say you have indeed won a fan of your poems dear
every poem i read is better than the previous.. you truly a wonderful poet…
keep writing more
Thank you, I am glad to know that:3~ I will ;D definitely :3~~~
wow love your visuals once again! All good my friend
Warmest Salad
Luke
Thank you! Glad you love it=P
impressive poem.
i really like that aggressive image at te top of this post too.
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html
Hello, friend:
Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…
xoxoxox
Your images are so vivid.. and words.. OMG you can read them in any manner possible, sci- fi, lovingly, intense.. you rock gurl.. It’s always a pleasure to read you.. I get a visual treat watching those pics.. Love ya loads xoxoxoxox
:p Glad you do!^^~ Visual matter and so does words
Excellent! I love the way you incorporate the shape of the poem.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/
Thank you!:D~
a poem fits the theme,
powerful words….
admirable word play.
Time for a war of words! >=P
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/sweet-princess-award-4-female-community-members/#comment-18296
awards for you.
support us by linking in 1 to 3 poems to our poetry potluck…
not necessarily related to the theme, any old poems would work.
Oh thank you so much Jingle, I will do the post up later as I have some works over here XD gonna rush