For Love, We Never Part
Upon
the reunion of love
we sang in celebration
War driven into the land
and force to make a decision
Towards the battlefield of no return
I will fight with pride and honor
For I know that you will always
be by my side no matter what
happens in the present or the
future, yet happiness is not
to be for everything is gone
at that point of sacrifice to save your precious beloved
Tears rain as pool of blood spattered across the field of peace
Pain took no control but your soul embraced me with warmth
Tears faded as I held my hand close to my chest
I knew we will never part for eternity
for now you live within me
The fusion of two souls
For love
we will
never
part
.
.
.
This is written for One Shot Wednesday Week #14 hosted by Brian at One Shot Poetry. A place where poets, writers and artist meet, to check out others’ wonderful writing, please click here.
This is also shared at Jingle Poetry for its Poetry Potluck Week #7 – Love and Romance. It is a place for poets to share and encourage, do check out the link available to check out other poets’ works. ^^~ Happy Poetry Potluck!
I love how you formed the poem and changed the colors….it really changed the way I read it. Amazing creativity and talent!
The fusion of two souls… what a powerful image! Great work!
Amy BL
Such emotion in this poem. Love the sentiment conveyed too.
Nice to read this again…
Very beautiful.. excellently presented too..union of souls..is there anything more beautiful.. thanks Riika.. loved your poetry..your think magically..
What an incredible amount of work you’ve gone to to create just the right look. Very impressed.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/missouri-1907/
…I knew we will never part for eternity
for now you live within me
The fusion of two souls
For love
we will
never
part…
…luv these lines…as always you share a treat for the mind and the eyes…ONE::
well done.
your use of colors and shapes are powerful.
The fiery passion of love expressed
Nicely done for One Shot
Thanks from the Moon
Beautiful poem, really love the heartfelt emotions.
So very beautiful! This is made even more powerful by the colors being connected.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/03/drawing-the-elementals/
A work of art!The words,the visuals,tatally amazing!I have learned so much since joining oneshot wednesday!And reading your work was a great education for me.Thanks.
And thanks for dropping by on my side,too!
Very well written…
Thank you for visiting….G
The weight of civilization falls through the center of your lines. Thank you, Gay @beachanny
Romantic and very colorful One Shot.
i like how you shaped the poem and also the use of the colors – gives the words an extra depth in meaning…deep and heartfelt
Very beautifully done, such a wonderful merge of emotion in words. Wonderful artistic setup. Love it!
~April
Nicely written Riika and cute blog..i like. Thanks for stopping by
heartwarming!
wonderful post..very clever and well written..i loved the last two lines, brilliant one shot
) i like it A LOT..:)
Amazing imagery Riika…the picture suits your poem to perfection. Well done x
Beautiful verse and even greater image of the words.. I loved it..
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Om Namah Shivaya
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Deep felt words, and great imagery.
Brilliant lines in meaning and visually. The placement of the colors when they change mid line through some of the words changes the way I read it. Truly amazing.
you’re poems are always so different. not only is the poem itself really amazing, the way you present it makes it even more surreal. great job.
thanks for stopping by, btw.
Beautiful imagery. Nice One Shot.
one of the things i love about your writing is that it does not end with the words…but the poem itsel is a piece of art…this one i think augments what you are saying nicely…two into one…nice one shot!
Creative presentation. The sadness is conveyed but the joy of love prevails.
Interesting poem. I like the way you visualize in words and art and colors.
Please check out my blog and the lovely artwork you sent me. I am so grateful and there’s a special acknowledgement I put up just for you: http://thoughtsnotlost.wordpress.com/
Much love and many thanks!
I just love the way you create your images to compliment the poem…such wonderful creativity.