Betrayal
Belief
driven the deepest
heart
You will never know what he is believing
Decision
determines the first
priority
You will never know what he is deciding
Benefit
stains the greediest
mind
You will never know what he is thinking
Discernment
loses in the process of
thinking
You will never know what he is judging
Backstabber
comes with the unexpected
action
You will never know what he is going to do
Death
concludes the ending
point
You will never know what will be his ending
Betrayal
holds the key to the
truth
make in this world
and only him
knows the
cause
of
it
love reading your work – keep em coming, you have a beautiful imagination and a fantastic way with words.
read like three different sketches. Nice. -J
Wow! While you are trying to breakdown your own understanding and reasoning, you have no idea what your significant other is thinking or doing – can you? You did an excellent job of portraying betrayal.
your writing is always impressive and well constructed in wording and shape…nice to have a treat here.
A very qualitative write…I like how the poem slides from the outer circle of the issue until it finally touches the inner most point…Wonderfully cool!
Cheers.
Excellent portrayal of the betrayal process…well done.
“Discernment looses in the process of thinking”… admire this precise writing..
Very well described deep feelings..
Thank you Amity
I always have a fascination to work on betrayal stuffs, dark stuffs and gores stuffs, I guess it is just me who love to think more and in a very much different way=P