All I can see is darkness…
Twinkles
within the heart
Sparkles
within the mind
Glitters
within the life
They
are everywhere
yet what we can see
is a pool of deep darkness
The frigidity of the deep aqua sea
Chilling down the spine of ourselves
Desperate for the light yet all we can
sight is the surge of despair & darkness
Drifting in the icy sea of dead and living
Sought for a dream that never seen real
Only be denied by the fate and destiny
Reaching out and it went on farther
Forsaken in the shadows of light
and we will forever stay in
the peak of light that
darkness will never
fade
.
.
.
Submitted over for Thursday Poets Rally Week 34 hosted by Jingle at here. It is a place where all the wonderful poems are been highlighted and appreciated, join in and have lots of fun, people. Cheers on =P
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Festive Poetry From Fabulous Poets (Highlight of Poets Rally Week 34) | Promising Poets' Parking Lot said this on December 12, 2010 at 3:34 AM |
Well written, and visually stunning! Bravo!
…we will forever stay in
the peak of light that
darkness will never
fade…
…felt.
AMAZING!!!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/12/03/eyes-in-a-room/
Thanks for your feedback on my rally entry–and the encouragement. I enjoyed your piece as well. Thanks for sharing!
“Twinkles within the heart
Sparkles within the mind
Glitters within the life”
Fantastic poem…The shape is maintained so well…
Hugs and smiles of light coming your way! Your darkness is very well described here!
Love it! and it looks like its in a form of a tear..AMAZING
I love the way you use shape and color with your poems. Great read, well done!
You look to be a poet with a lot of artistic skill and creativity
keep it up!
mine is here:
http://chinmay28.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/a-malignant-grief-2/
your poetry is both a literary and a visual treat !! love visiting your page every time !! and i read most of your blog in my mail any way
Ah, my kind of poetry! Full of darkness, almost making the darkness sound like hope! Brilliant work! One of your best out of all that I’ve read!
twinkle, sparkle, glittering..
love these words.
perfect entry.
thanks for the update of awards…will keep in mind of your new policy.
have fun!
Thank you=D You too! I will check out the others later when I get home!=P
WPW!!! The poetry, the presentation, the time you invest to present this to all of us. THANK YOU! Much appreciated and great piece as usual
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
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Agreement 4 Thursday Poets Rally Week 34 Participants | Promising Poets' Parking Lot said this on December 2, 2010 at 8:07 AM |
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Thursday Poets Rally Week 34 (December 2-8) | Jingle said this on December 2, 2010 at 8:05 AM |
Now I see, your creativity is not just how you shape words but the shape of the poem itself, highlighted with interesting colors for dimension … in darkness there is light, without one the other cannot exist .. I love creating from darkness, or most call it negative energy. But poetry, no matter where it begin is poetry. I said all of that to say this .. I enjoy your creativity. I have observed, that poems created from darkness, brings a lot of light.
A very unique twist to a classic poem.