The Key To Another World
Invasion
into
the world of
life and death
An unknown language
A strange culture but we
are only here for one thing
The key to another world
The door had always
existed
from the
beginning
only those
intelligent
ones are able
to see the
surface
The brain of
limitless ideas
The heart of
selfless thoughts
The soul of
endless dreams
The
one and only
key
to open
that
door
a world
that
never
existed
exist
.
.
.
Written for Thursday Poets Rally Week 37 (January 13-19) hosted by Jingle. Check out Promising Poets’ Parking Lot for more wonderful and amazing entries for this upcoming new year ;D, Cheers!
A story poem which is about a group of unknown race invaded a world that does not belong to them in order to find the key which will open a door to another world that they had been dreaming of everyday. A world that had been created within a person’s heart and mind.
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Extraordinary Poetry Is Here, Thank You!!!! | Promising Poets' Parking Lot said this on January 26, 2011 at 4:11 AM |
like the subliminal train of thought
Beautifully abstract!:)
Very great use of words.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/01/13/pieces/
the closing lines gave a sense of finality to the thought ! i like the way you present your ideas
Well done. Enjoyable to read more than once.
Riika, that illustration is stunning. You’re too good …
A beautiful, challenging piece!
Riika, you are so great..
Someone is Specia
Mysterious and thought provoking, along with the music and form of the poem.
My rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/01/14/january-in-the-desert-jingles-poetry-rally/
Beautiful poem !
Beautiful poem and its shape in black and red !
I love this. Thank you.
Very clever! -rallypoet-
Love the form and how it looks like a key. Really lovely.
this is simply beautiful…
I like this fantasy world you created with your words!
Nice poetry
lovely one rikka.. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
Love this shape poem…very well done.
Thrilled to see you in…
the key to another world is important…elegant delivery of your message…
Happy Rally!
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