Deadly Butterfly Betrayal

15 Responses to “Secret of Jade Oak”

1. Beautiful!

   Gally Lines ~ LestISmiteThee.wordpress.com said this on March 9, 2011 at 10:20 PM | Reply

2. Your poem inviting me to join you..the bg music apt to your poem too

   Iwrite4u said this on March 9, 2011 at 12:30 AM | Reply

3. beautiful acrostic poem. jade oak –the name is so intruiging.

   BUTTERFLIES OF TIME said this on March 6, 2011 at 5:27 PM | Reply

4. Indeed a very captivating poem and beautiful.

   slpmartin said this on March 6, 2011 at 4:19 AM | Reply

5. beautiful.. Riika and acrostics? din’t think so, but a wonderful execution loved it.

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   Leo (Leonnyes) said this on March 5, 2011 at 7:56 PM | Reply

6. I was captivated!

   thoughtsnotlost said this on March 5, 2011 at 10:54 AM | Reply

7. I like the theme of giving up personal sense of self, for true freedom at the hands of careless abandon into the Realm Of Jade Oak.

   Fantastic images and synchronous message
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   J. D. Hughes

   J. D. Hughes said this on March 5, 2011 at 9:33 AM | Reply

8. So creative and so beautifully written.

   JP

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   tasithoughts said this on March 5, 2011 at 6:33 AM | Reply

9. Love the acrostic ! very nice !

   Anonymous said this on March 4, 2011 at 12:07 PM | Reply

10. “secrecy lives within the dreams”____this phrase said so much to me. I wonder why so many secrets, why in dreams and not…how I wonder!!!!

    nice work riika!!!

    Life: Between the lines said this on March 4, 2011 at 9:03 AM | Reply

11. this one is GOOD! kind of said a lot to me.

    krissie said this on March 4, 2011 at 8:32 AM | Reply

12. I really loved it. It was like a world within a world

    lunawitch15 said this on March 4, 2011 at 7:40 AM | Reply

13. I love the way you have done this. There is a name for it – acrostic? Thank you. *Bows*

    Andy said this on March 4, 2011 at 2:54 AM | Reply

14. keep dreaming within the jade oak,
    this is lovely…very beautiful sentiments…

    Happy Rally.

    Jingle said this on March 4, 2011 at 12:56 AM | Reply

15. great ending, thanks.

    blackglassmoon said this on March 4, 2011 at 12:56 AM | Reply