Unlocking
Stage of
Truth and Lies
in between
lies
the rift of life
Stage of
Envy and Greed
in between
lies
the rift of heart
Stage of
Power and Strength
in between
lies
the rift of mind
Stage of
Happiness and Sorrow
in between
lies
the rift of soul
Unlocking every stage
with the right key
will bring you to
the place of
tranquility
One that you can never reject in your lifetime
It is time to understand
everything now…
Shared over at Monday Poetry Potluck Week #41 – Saints, Monks and Meditation hosted by Jingle Poetry. This week Jingle and me will be hosting the Potluck, do come in and join us on this wonderful week of a tranquility journey with your poems, hope to see you over there at Jingle Poetry!
love the ending and the use of colors was great as well
my potluck was here
http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/06/19/poem-smeared/
This really lovely =)
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The Celebrate Blogger of Summer Awards Nominations (4 categories) | Bluebell Ocean Waves said this on June 28, 2011 at 7:34 PM |
A lot of wisdom found in the depths of each verse. Very intriguing and much to remember.
Thought provoking words…beautiful presentation. (^_^)
really nice and so true….
Wow. Very nice.
powerful play on words
pretty format as usual, thanks for the visit!
Wow, just wonderful!
Beautiful! It gives me a lot to think about as to how I approach my own life
An intriguing piece… if only the keys were labeled, it would be so much easier to find them.
Great poem..
super stunning words, brilliant job.
wow this is truly awe inspiring.
Luna
Deep. Inquisitive reflection. Thanks for sharing!
Beautiful picture, and I love the colours you’ve used in the poem, it really makes certain lines stand out.
perfect and brilliant.
Cheers.
As intriguing as ever!
really beautiful.. i love it.. and the picture is irresistible..
amazing !!
loved it really 